I sent off the final revision on “How Burlmarr Saved the Unseen Protector” Saturday. Got an email from Phil saying it looked great. I was a little worried that he might have wanted me to go even further than I did with the added scene.
I’ll have to wait a little longer on feedback for Maiden. [...]
With baited breath
Filed under Writing Journal on October 18, 2004
Keywords: Maiden of Pain, Realms of the Dragons II
New scene added; still need players
Filed under Love Your Geek, Writing Journal on October 13, 2004
Keywords: Dungeons and Dragons, Realms of the Dragons II
I pumped out the scene Phil wanted me to add to the short story last night. It adds about another 800 words to the length, but I’m still well under the maximum limit. The writing wasn’t my best; I don’t feel I conveyed well enough the wonder of the different experiences that take place. I’m [...]
Revisiting Burlmarr
Filed under Writing Journal on October 12, 2004
Keywords: Realms of the Dragons II
I’m having a hard time staying on task this last hour of work, so I thought I’d go ahead and post a blog entry. I read through “How Burlmarr Saved the Unseen Protector” last night, making little nips and tucks as I went. I changed the name of the inn in Leilon so that I’m [...]
A week off
Filed under AFK, Love Your Geek, Writing Journal on October 11, 2004
Keywords: Dungeons and Dragons, Maiden of Pain, Neverwinter Nights, Realms of the Dragons II
No, I’m not taking another break from the blog. I decided to take a break from writing last week, though. I played a lot of Neverwinter Nights. I watched TV. And I spent some time with family and friends. It was very relaxing.
I did think about the revisions on my short story for RotD2. I’m [...]
Let the revisions begin
Filed under Writing Journal on October 6, 2004
Keywords: Realms of the Dragons II
I got the revision notes on my short story back from Phil yesterday. He wanted me to axe the last paragraph (it bordered on cliche, which I knew) and add a scene that I had let happen “off-screen.” I guess the antho is running a little short on page count. There was also an inn/tavern [...]
